Need Eyes on Your Personal Statement? I’ll Help You Clarify, Cut, and Strengthen It

If you're second-guessing your personal statement or wondering if it’s “good enough,” I’ve been there.

I applied last year, got into 5 dental schools (including an Ivy), and I know how hard it is to tell your story clearly under pressure. I’m not a consultant. I’m a peer who gets it.

This service gives you two full rounds of personal feedback to sharpen your essay. Not just grammar fixes, but structure, tone, clarity, and storytelling.

Here’s how it works:
📝 Round 1: I’ll leave detailed comments directly in your doc on everything: grammar, structure, syntax, clarity, emotional impact, and pacing
🔁 You revise at your pace, on your terms
📝 Round 2: I’ll go through it again with the same depth to help you lock it in

📦 What you’ll get:
• Honest, focused feedback from someone who just went through it
• Fast turnaround: usually 2–3 days
• No fluff. Just clarity.

This is for you if you’re early in the process and need direction or close to submitting and want a sanity check that actually helps.